Monthly Archive: September 2013

What I Tell Myself When Revising

Sometimes I tell myself these things when I’m writing something new, but usually it’s when I’m revising that I really have to pay heed to them.  Some people might call these tips or rules for writing — I would say they are more like self-admonishments.  The order below is roughly the frequency, highest to lowest, …

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Inspiration in the Sierra Nevada

It was not quite a year ago that I took a geology field trip run by my friend Tom to Yosemite and the Eastern Sierra.  At the time I was on my second round of revisions to the ending of M&S, and some of the mountains and geology from that trip really played into the writing of the last few chapters.  Below are a few of the pictures I took.

Half Dome from atop Sentinel Dome

Half Dome and Yosemite Valley from atop Sentinel Dome

Tenaya Lake as seen from Olmstead Point

Tenaya Lake as seen from Olmstead Point

View eastward en route to Tioga Pass

View eastward en route to Tioga Pass

 

View of the Minarets

View of the Minarets

 

A Day in the Life

Today I cut over 3000 words.  Ouch.  It would hurt more if it had been good stuff that just didn’t fit, but it was pretty much crap.  I also relearned that if none of the changes I make to a bad sentence improve it, I probably don’t need the sentence.  The good side to this …

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I found out last Friday that the UK rights have been acquired by Headline Publishing Group (a division of Hachette).  They will be publishing at the same time, though likely with a different cover, which is still in the works.  Here’s a link to their site.  It’s very exciting!

http://www.hachette.co.uk/books/detail.page?isbn=9781472214843